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Looking into your eyes
i see the pain you hide inside.
crying is your only weakness,
your painful tears make you speechless

"Just do it!
Kill youself like you said you would!"
he said "Im tired of waiting! maybe i should!"

"you cant stand to exist,
the knives the pills
you cant resist.

"Slice your wrists.
the pills make your stomach twist:
now its time, time for you to regret,
the painful memories you tried to forget.

was it worth it?
now they're flashing before your eyes.
now your remembering them as you die."

"I dont want to die." you said.
"I do not want to be dead!"

now its to late.
death is your fate.

Part 2

Its been two days
since you passed away.
Everything that i said was true
even after all the pain you put me through

I will forever be cursed
with the sight of them
placing you into the hearse

I could have saved you
what have i done?
its to late now;
now that your gone

you wanted to live
i could tell
now death will forever stalk you
down in hell

I didnt think you would do it
i was just messing around
you did it silently
you didnt make a sound

you called my name
your eyes turning black
i thought that you would continue to yell
so i didnt turn back

I went to you to apologize
about all the cheating
and all the lies

but what i had seen
i could have fainted
you killed yourself
because my love was tainted

I stood there in shock
listening to the ticking of the clock

there was nothing i could do
but hate myself because i betrayed you

I loved you so.
i wanted to let you no

but it was to late
you were surrounded in blood
you killed yourself
to reveal your love

"Im sorry!" i screamed
wile holding you tight
your life was ended
with just one fight

now it was my turn
time to feel your pain
you past it on to me
i had myself to blame

regrets turn into hate
hate was my fate

Part 3

The headlines read
that she was dead
she killed herself
of all her regrets

she died to forget all the memories aswell
even if it meant she was going to hell

she found him there
as miserable as can be
she looked him in the eyes
and knelt down to one knee

"I love you" she said
"I came to put this all to an end"

he said "why did you do it?
why do it now?
you could have found love again
someway somehow"

she said in a low voice
" i couldnt live without you by my side
all i wanted was to die.

I needed to be with you again
your living in my head.
now you no i love you
and its not pretend,"

she kissed his scorched lips
he held on to her hips

then they heard a loud noise
something wasnt right
the devil flew down
and got sick at the sight

he yelled and screamed, and yelled somemore
then he opened ash mountains door

"stop that this instant!" he yelled
"we'll have none of that here;
here in hell!

you broke the only rule
that love doesnt exist
now you will burn for eternity."
he said while clinching his fists

the followed the devil
to ash mountains gates
then something over-whelmed them
it was something great

a beatiful lightfloated gracefully down
out of the misty sky
the devil got scared
and ran to hide

They heard a voice
it sounded so clear
they looked around
but no one was near

"Its god" she whispered
" i wonder why hes here
maybe he came
to put the devil in fear"

The light came closer
they were both scared
maybe it was the devils jokes
all they did was stare

the great voice said
"I am god, dont follow the devils tricks
i came to tell you
that love does exist

you did your part
here in hell
i came to invite you
to where the angels dwell

you broke the curse
of forbidden love
now i welcome you
to the heavens above"

now they were happy
more than ever
knowing that they will be
together forever
Looking into your eyes
i see the pain you hide inside.
crying is your only weakness,
your painful tears make you speechless

"Just do it!
Kill youself like you said you would!"
he said "Im tired of waiting! maybe i should!"

"you cant stand to exist,
the knives the pills
you cant resist.

"Slice your wrists.
the pills make your stomach twist:
now its time, time for you to regret,
the painful memories you tried to forget.

was it worth it?
now they're flashing before your eyes.
now your remembering them as you die."

"I dont want to die." you said.
"I do not want to be dead!"

now its to late.
death is your fate.

Part 2

Its been two days
since you passed away.
Everything that i said was true
even after all the pain you put me through

I will forever be cursed
with the sight of them
placing you into the hearse

I could have saved you
what have i done?
its to late now;
now that your gone

you wanted to live
i could tell
now death will forever stalk you
down in hell

I didnt think you would do it
i was just messing around
you did it silently
you didnt make a sound

you called my name
your eyes turning black
i thought that you would continue to yell
so i didnt turn back

I went to you to apologize
about all the cheating
and all the lies

but what i had seen
i could have fainted
you killed yourself
because my love was tainted

I stood there in shock
listening to the ticking of the clock

there was nothing i could do
but hate myself because i betrayed you

I loved you so.
i wanted to let you no

but it was to late
you were surrounded in blood
you killed yourself
to reveal your love

"Im sorry!" i screamed
wile holding you tight
your life was ended
with just one fight

now it was my turn
time to feel your pain
you past it on to me
i had myself to blame

regrets turn into hate
hate was my fate

Part 3

The headlines read
that she was dead
she killed herself
of all her regrets

she died to forget all the memories aswell
even if it meant she was going to hell

she found him there
as miserable as can be
she looked him in the eyes
and knelt down to one knee

"I love you" she said
"I came to put this all to an end"

he said "why did you do it?
why do it now?
you could have found love again
someway somehow"

she said in a low voice
" i couldnt live without you by my side
all i wanted was to die.

I needed to be with you again
your living in my head.
now you no i love you
and its not pretend,"

she kissed his scorched lips
he held on to her hips

then they heard a loud noise
something wasnt right
the devil flew down
and got sick at the sight

he yelled and screamed, and yelled somemore
then he opened ash mountains door

"stop that this instant!" he yelled
"we'll have none of that here;
here in hell!

you broke the only rule
that love doesnt exist
now you will burn for eternity."
he said while clinching his fists

the followed the devil
to ash mountains gates
then something over-whelmed them
it was something great

a beatiful lightfloated gracefully down
out of the misty sky
the devil got scared
and ran to hide

They heard a voice
it sounded so clear
they looked around
but no one was near

"Its god" she whispered
" i wonder why hes here
maybe he came
to put the devil in fear"

The light came closer
they were both scared
maybe it was the devils jokes
all they did was stare

the great voice said
"I am god, dont follow the devils tricks
i came to tell you
that love does exist

you did your part
here in hell
i came to invite you
to where the angels dwell

you broke the curse
of forbidden love
now i welcome you
to the heavens above"

now they were happy
more than ever
knowing that they will be
together forever
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Featured here! [link]
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Siren-Badru Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Romeo and Juliet.
There's a lot of people I'd take a bullet for
But only two I'd follow in death..
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dammnit Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Writer
Beautiful. Lots of love from afar. Chris
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Beautiful
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I love this. Its so powerfull, and inspiring
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Damn.
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brambo92 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
I really like it!

I truly love my girlfriend and we both made mistakes aswell. I have thought a lot about what you described in part 2. To regain the trust and credibilty.
Hope time does heal that cuz it just has to.

thanks :)
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Amazingg.......
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Wow..
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Nice...
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