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Looking into your eyes
i see the pain you hide inside.
crying is your only weakness,
your painful tears make you speechless

"Just do it!
Kill youself like you said you would!"
he said "Im tired of waiting! maybe i should!"

"you cant stand to exist,
the knives the pills
you cant resist.

"Slice your wrists.
the pills make your stomach twist:
now its time, time for you to regret,
the painful memories you tried to forget.

was it worth it?
now they're flashing before your eyes.
now your remembering them as you die."

"I dont want to die." you said.
"I do not want to be dead!"

now its to late.
death is your fate.

Part 2

Its been two days
since you passed away.
Everything that i said was true
even after all the pain you put me through

I will forever be cursed
with the sight of them
placing you into the hearse

I could have saved you
what have i done?
its to late now;
now that your gone

you wanted to live
i could tell
now death will forever stalk you
down in hell

I didnt think you would do it
i was just messing around
you did it silently
you didnt make a sound

you called my name
your eyes turning black
i thought that you would continue to yell
so i didnt turn back

I went to you to apologize
about all the cheating
and all the lies

but what i had seen
i could have fainted
you killed yourself
because my love was tainted

I stood there in shock
listening to the ticking of the clock

there was nothing i could do
but hate myself because i betrayed you

I loved you so.
i wanted to let you no

but it was to late
you were surrounded in blood
you killed yourself
to reveal your love

"Im sorry!" i screamed
wile holding you tight
your life was ended
with just one fight

now it was my turn
time to feel your pain
you past it on to me
i had myself to blame

regrets turn into hate
hate was my fate

Part 3

The headlines read
that she was dead
she killed herself
of all her regrets

she died to forget all the memories aswell
even if it meant she was going to hell

she found him there
as miserable as can be
she looked him in the eyes
and knelt down to one knee

"I love you" she said
"I came to put this all to an end"

he said "why did you do it?
why do it now?
you could have found love again
someway somehow"

she said in a low voice
" i couldnt live without you by my side
all i wanted was to die.

I needed to be with you again
your living in my head.
now you no i love you
and its not pretend,"

she kissed his scorched lips
he held on to her hips

then they heard a loud noise
something wasnt right
the devil flew down
and got sick at the sight

he yelled and screamed, and yelled somemore
then he opened ash mountains door

"stop that this instant!" he yelled
"we'll have none of that here;
here in hell!

you broke the only rule
that love doesnt exist
now you will burn for eternity."
he said while clinching his fists

the followed the devil
to ash mountains gates
then something over-whelmed them
it was something great

a beatiful lightfloated gracefully down
out of the misty sky
the devil got scared
and ran to hide

They heard a voice
it sounded so clear
they looked around
but no one was near

"Its god" she whispered
" i wonder why hes here
maybe he came
to put the devil in fear"

The light came closer
they were both scared
maybe it was the devils jokes
all they did was stare

the great voice said
"I am god, dont follow the devils tricks
i came to tell you
that love does exist

you did your part
here in hell
i came to invite you
to where the angels dwell

you broke the curse
of forbidden love
now i welcome you
to the heavens above"

now they were happy
more than ever
knowing that they will be
together forever
Looking into your eyes
i see the pain you hide inside.
crying is your only weakness,
your painful tears make you speechless

"Just do it!
Kill youself like you said you would!"
he said "Im tired of waiting! maybe i should!"

"you cant stand to exist,
the knives the pills
you cant resist.

"Slice your wrists.
the pills make your stomach twist:
now its time, time for you to regret,
the painful memories you tried to forget.

was it worth it?
now they're flashing before your eyes.
now your remembering them as you die."

"I dont want to die." you said.
"I do not want to be dead!"

now its to late.
death is your fate.

Part 2

Its been two days
since you passed away.
Everything that i said was true
even after all the pain you put me through

I will forever be cursed
with the sight of them
placing you into the hearse

I could have saved you
what have i done?
its to late now;
now that your gone

you wanted to live
i could tell
now death will forever stalk you
down in hell

I didnt think you would do it
i was just messing around
you did it silently
you didnt make a sound

you called my name
your eyes turning black
i thought that you would continue to yell
so i didnt turn back

I went to you to apologize
about all the cheating
and all the lies

but what i had seen
i could have fainted
you killed yourself
because my love was tainted

I stood there in shock
listening to the ticking of the clock

there was nothing i could do
but hate myself because i betrayed you

I loved you so.
i wanted to let you no

but it was to late
you were surrounded in blood
you killed yourself
to reveal your love

"Im sorry!" i screamed
wile holding you tight
your life was ended
with just one fight

now it was my turn
time to feel your pain
you past it on to me
i had myself to blame

regrets turn into hate
hate was my fate

Part 3

The headlines read
that she was dead
she killed herself
of all her regrets

she died to forget all the memories aswell
even if it meant she was going to hell

she found him there
as miserable as can be
she looked him in the eyes
and knelt down to one knee

"I love you" she said
"I came to put this all to an end"

he said "why did you do it?
why do it now?
you could have found love again
someway somehow"

she said in a low voice
" i couldnt live without you by my side
all i wanted was to die.

I needed to be with you again
your living in my head.
now you no i love you
and its not pretend,"

she kissed his scorched lips
he held on to her hips

then they heard a loud noise
something wasnt right
the devil flew down
and got sick at the sight

he yelled and screamed, and yelled somemore
then he opened ash mountains door

"stop that this instant!" he yelled
"we'll have none of that here;
here in hell!

you broke the only rule
that love doesnt exist
now you will burn for eternity."
he said while clinching his fists

the followed the devil
to ash mountains gates
then something over-whelmed them
it was something great

a beatiful lightfloated gracefully down
out of the misty sky
the devil got scared
and ran to hide

They heard a voice
it sounded so clear
they looked around
but no one was near

"Its god" she whispered
" i wonder why hes here
maybe he came
to put the devil in fear"

The light came closer
they were both scared
maybe it was the devils jokes
all they did was stare

the great voice said
"I am god, dont follow the devils tricks
i came to tell you
that love does exist

you did your part
here in hell
i came to invite you
to where the angels dwell

you broke the curse
of forbidden love
now i welcome you
to the heavens above"

now they were happy
more than ever
knowing that they will be
together forever
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Scr1b3 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Featured here! [link]
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Siren-Badru Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Romeo and Juliet.
There's a lot of people I'd take a bullet for
But only two I'd follow in death..
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dammnit Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Writer
Beautiful. Lots of love from afar. Chris
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SilverShadowPheonix Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
Beautiful
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HannahPromiseLove Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. Its so powerfull, and inspiring
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Dove-Saved-By-Grace Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Damn.
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brambo92 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
I really like it!

I truly love my girlfriend and we both made mistakes aswell. I have thought a lot about what you described in part 2. To regain the trust and credibilty.
Hope time does heal that cuz it just has to.

thanks :)
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VickiePaige Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazingg.......
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Owlll Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Student General Artist
Wow..
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PZI7598 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
Nice...
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Bel-serpente Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
if haden't read the last bit I would have been depressed al day...^^ but now I is happy^^
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darkangel161 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
aww...
that is really great! :)
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sakura1215 Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
i loved it simply amazing
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If-We-JusT-SmiLe Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009
Made me cry :] good job
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omggian Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009   Photographer
I effing love this.
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LittleTenshi Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009
One of the most beautifull poems I have ever read in my whole life. It's really deep.
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azaleeya Featured By Owner May 13, 2009
wow i love this it made me cry and i know how it feels to crush the one you love, i did that and now i regret it and no matter what i do ill never have him back
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pinky-the-heghog Featured By Owner May 26, 2009
a nice love poem in my eyes
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azaleeya Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009
ya thats true i loved it
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iHeartChangminoppa Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009
Deep. Really deep.
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xblackxheartx101 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008
this is so good and reaches down to me in some levels
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LostHeart-EmtpySoul Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
Really good. It made me cry like a baby but that's good.
I'm afraid no one will ever love me ever since I'm always the one with a broken heart.
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Darkness1-2 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008
One of the most amazing love poems I've ever read
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DessaBoo Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008
wow that was really good but it brought back some memories i couldnt return anwayz i wanted to say really nice poem ur on ur way great job
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NurseOfDeath Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008
lolz i never get tired of reading this ^^
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NurseOfDeath Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2007
omg that so beautiful hey can you make one for me & my friend please. i really would really like it it would mean alot to me ^^
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cry-emo666 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2008
hEY!
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FatalBlackRose69 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is really good :o
favs :D
it touches me so.
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Aww, that is so sweet.. Poems with a beautiful ending give me hope in my relationship, helps me see that not all romances have a painful ending. I really like it.. It's just so... gorgeous. You have talent, don't ever waste it.
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infamousyumyum Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2006
Even in the pits of hell and death???
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infamousyumyum Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2006
Such an emotional and meaningful poem. But do you really believe love conquers all??? Greatness.
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cry-emo666 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2006
yes... i do beleive that love conquers all... even in hell... without love, this world would be hell... there would be no heaven... just hell... we just have to prove to people that love does exist even in the sinners... as soon as people reach the depths of hell then they will realize what love really meant and how they could have improved there life, but they chose not to.. they beleived that no one will love them, so they turn bad.. to prove to people that they can be feared and not loved..

i fear love.. its my phobia.. im afraid of broken hearts... it looks to me that im about ready to get myself into a heartbreak with the way that my boyfriend is treating me.. im scared to death at this point.. im trying to prove to him how much i love him so that he wotn leave me... i feel like its a one-sided relationship.. without him i would be insane.. im only 15 years old and this is the first time i have been in-love, but im not ready for the aftermath of a broken heart..

"is this love? or is this another figment of my imagination, torn between reality and fantesy?" _ Celeste (me)

w/b
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infamousyumyum Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2006
In a relationship both partners have to contribute to it. It seems like your boyfriend is not. Love doesn't have to be a phobia. Sure the aftermath is always unclear and possibly bad but if you truly believe in your love then the aftermath does or should not exist. However in your situation, as you say it is a one-sided relationship, it can be difficult. But do you really love this guy? Do you plan on being with him forever? I think the most important thing in a relationship (especailly in a serious one) is to love and be loved. You are still quite young, and you have a whole lifetime ahead of you. Greatness.
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seataurus902 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2006
Wow...
I really like this..
I mean it o_o; This is really good ^-^ It kind of just reaches into you or something...
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